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    August 10

    我爱过曾经的你

    我爱过一个曾经的你,
    有倔强的眼神 和 放纵的心。
    在废墟的城市里,
    如同负鼠一般滑行,
    在无限的黄昏的空气中,
    寻找一丝浅绿的苔印。

    我们热爱过,
    无边的枯萎的枝桠,
    和天边的一抹白云,
    在秋风起落的山头,
    听太阳的叹息。

    而现在的你我又在哪?
    城市的霓虹总是任意剪裁着黄昏后被拉长的身影,
    分不清
    我与他 或者他与你

    于是,我们偶尔回头
    想象中彼此的背影,
    然后
    在各自的故事里老去。

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    noni Wwrote:
    我以为是王敖那诗的后遗症
    Sept. 9
    lizwrote:
    你以为我是写给谁的?
    Aug. 31
    noni Wwrote:
    我爱过一个曾经的自己。。。不晓得是自恋还是自弃
    Aug. 31
    ivy zhaowrote:
    读着这样的文字,我觉得我正像那位在"Amadeus"里慢慢朽去的老人.
    Aug. 13
    ivy zhaowrote:
    城市的霓虹总是任意剪裁着黄昏后被拉长的身影...
    ...然后, 在各自的故事里老去...


    Aug. 13
    Qiuwrote:
    荔枝,写的散文越来越有诗情画意了。不错。最后一段,作者还是写的比较忧伤,表达对往事的怀念但又无可奈何一种心境。
    Aug. 11
    Ryan Xuwrote:
    文采比我好n倍
    Aug. 10
    Philip TSEwrote:
    我们也会在别人的故事里慢慢被遗忘~~~
    Aug. 10
    Tiffanywrote:
    我喜欢“负鼠”那句~~~
    Aug. 10

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